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iNeed YouSam awoke to the sound of rain beating on the window. "Uhhhh, another miserable day....might as well skip school again." It was three days ago that she and Freddie broke up., And her mom had started drinking again and was yelling at the TV for no apparent reason. Sam pulled the blankets up over her head and began to sob.It had been a good two hours sense Sam had fallen asleep when her phone rang. Sam picked her phone up from her nightstand and answered. "What!" Sam said groggily into her phone. "Where are you Sam? You've skipped school for the past four days. What's up?" Carly said with a nit of concern for her best friend. "Oh it's you, Carls. I'm just not feeling very well. That's all." Sam lie. hoping that would convince Carly. " C'mon, Sam, I know your still upset about you and Freddie. I'll come over after school. Okay?" Carly said and hung up before Sam could refuse her. Sam hung up and closed her eyes. Then her phone dinged. A text from Freddie.To: SamFrom: FreddieHey, Sam.
First KissHe asked her what she wanted,"A kiss." was her reply.He smiled at her and said,"Well then maybe I'll kiss you at five."Heart beating fast,As butterflies took wing in her stomach as she smiled back,The thought of this sent her mind racing, a kissHer first kiss...